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2009-12-05 01:35:15

Hmmm...

Reviewing the over all flash.
It was kinda boring IMO. I understand you're learning how to use flash and all of its tools but I'm pretty sure you could have put more effort into this one. After seeing your first entry as well i'm noticing a pattern most beginners do alot. You're focusing more on your drawings then the flash itself. In can see you have the ability to draw a picture but show me things you can do with them and other things your sister teaches you.
This one is under the game/interactive section so i can see you've learned how to incorporrate buttons into flash which is helpful and good. Other than that it's nothing really worth being in the flash portal... well let's just say it's something I'd expect to see in the art portal (IMO practice is good but putting up practice work on NG seems pointless unless you get helpful feedback from the right people.)

tl;dr version:This is problably the highest quality "Youtube slideshow" I've ever seen. jk not rly

Try working more with buttons and go all out with practice works.
Note so your minions don't attack me: I'm not saying this is bad I just feel with the score it had it should have given me more to look forward to. Idk if my opinions are wrong or right that's your choice to decide.
*Yes I know it's a sketchbook but I seriously think you can do better. Use flash. Don't recycle you artwork.

Sabtastic responds:

I guess I should expect a review or two with those kinds of perspectives.. lol
But thanks all the same for such a genuine review. It's refreshing to get these once in a while, rather than just: "Aweosme. 10/10."
You make very valid points in a lot of your comment, but on the flip-side, there was a reason behind posting this all in one sketchbook and keeping it "boring". I didn't want to spam the art portal with obviously sub-par artwork (compared the thing things I normally submit). Additionally, I didn't really want to put EXPONENTIAL LIFE DRAINING effort into something that only had 'sketches' in it. For example, if this was a collection of the best art i've ever made EVER, I'd feel inclined to put a little more work into it.

Like I hinted at before, it was just another thing I did for fun/practise. c:
Thanks again!

~Cheers.

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